Whoa! Instantaneous feedback!

I've changed it a bit at the end while you were commenting.

So glad you liked it! My favourite memory is coming to the hospital to see my baby brother for the first time. I was ten years old and he was the tiniest, prettiest pink baby I'd ever seen and his head smelled of flowers and his hand was the softest thing I'd ever touched. I was totally entranced. I think that was what I was channelling here.