ladymirth

You know, the problem with editing is that it would remove all of the fun, raucous sort of spontaneity in this. I think the imagery's perfect and you stick to the rhythm enough to give it form but are playful enough with it that I want to get half-drunk on champagne and then go running down a beach barefoot in a big froofy prom dress. (With company, obviously.) You come out with such lovely stuff when you write -- more!